Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the one company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

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to see
workers
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one
company
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life
since
workers
usually tend to switch
companies
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their
career
life
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workers
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work
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life
balance and
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flexibility
and
career
growth
opportunities
to end with being fulfilled and satisfied with jobs.
Companies
need to put more effort
in
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knowing their
workers
need to increase their loyalty
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the
company
and find
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meaning and purpose to devote their working
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life time
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for
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the same
company
. I think one of the main reasons
employee
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are changing
companies
regularly is the search for
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work-life
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work
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life
balance. during the pandemic working from home became more common and it provided more flexibility for the
employee
. one
the
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important causes is the
opportunities
for
career
growth
, not all
companies
provide those choices and being satisfied with your job is important for staying committed to it, those are two main reasons that are causing
employee
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to switch
companies
searching for better
career
choices in their
life
.
Companies
can contribute
in
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keeping their
employee
by putting their needs into consideration.
This
can help
companies
gain the loyalty of their
worker
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and increase a sense of belonging in their
work
environment. Providing
opportunities
for
career
growth
are
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essential for employees,
hence
it creates a sense of meaning and
increase
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their
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commitment
committment
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commitment
to the
company
. to
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sum
it up, a small action
such
as
survey
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a survey
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and taking feedback for
further
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improvement
improvment
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improvement
can make a big
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for both
of
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the
company
and their employees. As we can see, now it takes more effort to retain
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an employee
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employee
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employees
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for a longer period of time.
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Employees
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Emoplyee
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Employees
are
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looking for more job satisfaction and
companies
can’t lure them by just paying higher salaries
instead
they need to offer more
opportunities
for
career
growth
and job
fulfillment
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to make the
work
environment a meaningful place to wake up every morning.
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