Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school. It would be a good idea to adopt this system, for men and possibly women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Several Nations follow a mandatory rule that their male citizens should undergo mandatory military
service
after school education. Many people favour this
concept of military services for men and also
for women if possible. I agree with this
statement completely and I believe that it would be better if all nations follow this
rule without any gender differences.
Firstly
, military services expose a person to the most extreme environment either physically or mentally. This
is a part of military training and this
will help a person to mould his personality, develop survival skills and also
will teach how to adapt to a difficult situation. For example
, people from nations who follow mandatory military service
are generally seen as very bold characters, and they face and survive difficult situations easily. The autobiography
of many world-famous leaders Fix the agreement mistake
autobiographies
says
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benefit
that they got from mandatory military Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
service
.
Secondly
, military service
will give a student to have
a small break from the school environment which allows them to see and think from a wider perspective, Verb problem
apply
this
break time can be used for an overall
assessment and hence
students don't want to rush to their higher education. For Example
, there are a lot of successful professionals are seen from these countries who follow compulsory services.
To conclude
, for a successful future generation, mandatory military service
is essential and government and authorities should provide the chance to all types of people, without any discrimination on gender, caste and religion which will help to build a strong nation.Submitted by bilujohn on
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