Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school. It would be a good idea to adopt this system, for men and possibly women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Several Nations follow a mandatory rule that their male citizens should undergo mandatory military
service
after school education. Many people favour
this
concept of military services for men and
also
for women if possible. I agree with
this
statement completely and I believe that it would be better if all nations follow
this
rule without any gender differences.
Firstly
, military services expose a person to the most extreme environment either physically or mentally.
This
is a part of military training and
this
will help a person to mould his personality, develop survival skills and
also
will teach how to adapt to a difficult situation.
For example
, people from nations who follow mandatory military
service
are generally seen as very bold characters, and they face and survive difficult situations easily. The
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of many world-famous leaders
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about the
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that they got from mandatory military
service
.
Secondly
, military
service
will give a student
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a small break from the school environment which allows them to see and think from a wider perspective,
this
break time can be used for an
overall
assessment and
hence
students don't want to rush to their higher education.
For Example
, there are a lot of successful professionals are seen from these countries who follow compulsory services.
To conclude
, for a successful future generation, mandatory military
service
is essential and government and authorities should provide the chance to all types of people, without any discrimination on gender, caste and religion which will help to build a strong nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compulsory
  • Military service
  • Conscription
  • Patriotism
  • National security
  • Social equality
  • Discipline
  • Physical fitness
  • Life skills
  • Job training
  • Infringement
  • Conscripts
  • Gender equality
  • Mandatory
  • Economy
  • Education system
  • Labor market
  • Civil service
  • Alternative forms
  • Balanced view
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