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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

#summarise #information #features #comparisons
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The graph below demonstrates that a country’s
GDP
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 cost
on
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 three areas,
such
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 as health , education , roads and
railways
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,
proportion
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during
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from
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 2000 to 2025.
To begin
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 with, it is obvious that the
proportion
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 of the money on
heath
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health
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 people cost steadily increasing while the roads and
railways
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 take up less and less
proportion
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 of
GDP
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 during the 20 years from 2000 to 2025 and become the lowest
percentage
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 of
GDP
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 in 2025 though it takes the highest
proportion
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 at the beginning, and both of the health and roads and
railways
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 occupied the same
percentage
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 which
are
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 approximately 4
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percentage
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percent
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 of
GDP
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 around 2006, and they
finally
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 take up the
proportion
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 of
GDP
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 are 7.5 and 2.6 respectively. As for
the
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education, it begins with the lowest
percentage
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 of GPD and
punctual
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during
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from
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the
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apply
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2000 to 2025 and
finally
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become
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becomes
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 higher
as
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at
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 4.2
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percentage
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per cent
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 than the beginning around less than 3
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percentage
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per cent
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 and
be
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is
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 the midst
proportion
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 of GPD
compare
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compared
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 to health and road and
railways
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.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
  • Relationship
  • Correlation
  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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