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The graph below demonstrates that a country’s

GDP

cost

on

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three areas,

such

as health , education , roads and

railways

,

proportion

during

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from

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2000 to 2025.

To begin

with, it is obvious that the

proportion

of the money on

heath

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health

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people cost steadily increasing while the roads and

railways

take up less and less

proportion

of

GDP

during the 20 years from 2000 to 2025 and become the lowest

percentage

of

GDP

in 2025 though it takes the highest

proportion

at the beginning, and both of the health and roads and

railways

occupied the same

percentage

which

are

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approximately 4

percentage

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of

GDP

around 2006, and they

finally

take up the

proportion

of

GDP

are 7.5 and 2.6 respectively. As for

the

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education, it begins with the lowest

percentage

of GPD and

punctual

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during

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the

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2000 to 2025 and

finally

become

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higher

as

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4.2

percentage

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than the beginning around less than 3

percentage

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and

be

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is

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the midst

proportion

of GPD

compare

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to health and road and

railways

.