In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter: · Describe your schedule and situation · Explain why you cannot continue the course · Say what action you would like to take

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Dear Ms Franklin, I am writing to you because I will not be able to continue with the Computer Science

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at the Community College. In November, I was promoted from Warehouse Technician to Staff Manager. I have been working increasingly long hours in my full-time job. The extra responsibilities have given me excellent experience while

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allowing me to realise my true passions in the technology field.

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new promotion,

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, has fortunately left me with hardly any time to pursue other interests and hobbies. It is for

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reason that I must regrettably drop out of the Computer Science

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. Your session has been extremely rewarding and I know they will be useful in the future. I am aware that

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course

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will be offered again in the Spring Semester. Would it be possible to join the cohort

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semester? I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to take part in your

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again. Thank you for understanding. Sincerely, Frank Hudson

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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162 words

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