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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter - remind him when and where you met - tell him what kind of job you are interested in -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Hello Mr John, I am Ozan, I hope you remember me. We met on the plane when we go to France. We talked about business and at that time you mentioned your chain of restaurants. It was very nice for me to talk about your experiences. I learned many things from that journey.
Also
 when we discuss how people establish their own companies and you gave me some suggestions.
Furthermore
, you said that I can apply to your company to work. Actually,
last
 month I resigned from my job. I have been searching new job for almost one month. As you know my old job was managing restaurants, that's why if you need employers who have experience in operating and organizing restaurants, I would be happy to work in your company. I had been working for 5 years in the restaurant industry due to I believe that I can help you.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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