A friend is considering buying a house nearby, but you have decided to leave the area due to a rise in crime. Write a letter to your friend advising them not to move into the neighborhood. In your letter: - Recommend that your friend not go ahead with the purchase - Give the reasons behind your decision to leave - Suggest possible alternative areas that you know
Dear Sonia
I am writing
this
letter regarding your decision to buy a new house in our neighborhood
. To be honest, I am very glad Change the spelling
neighbourhood
Correct your spelling
because
beacuse
we can meet each other Correct your spelling
because
everyday
, but the problem is that Replace the word
every day
this
area is not secure anymore. Moreover
, according to the
recent Correct article usage
a
report
the crime rate has increased drastically in Add a comma
,report
this
part as compared to other sides.
Additionally
, my whole family are moving in the next
year in
sector 17. Change preposition
to
That is
more
safe and Add an article
a more
secure
area and the house designs are Correct quantifier usage
more secure
beautiful
Change the adjective
beautifully
included
Wrong verb form
including
the
better facilities. Kindly request to you that you should see a new Correct article usage
apply
Correct your spelling
accommodation
accomodation
in Correct your spelling
accommodation
this
sector. If you need any Correct your spelling
further
futher
details Correct your spelling
further
of
Change preposition
about
property
, let me know. I hope you will agree with my advice and we will be together Add an article
the property
a property
on
a new place.
Best wishes
GaganChange preposition
in
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.