Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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views in the below essay in my own opinion.
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with, People who remain in the same field can develop working relationships with
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co-workers which can make
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that leads to his personal development along with the development of the
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to another can have
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own perks and they will be learning to
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adopt
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to the new culture every time they change the
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can build them a stronger
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,
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professionally and personally.
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; Stephan Winkelmann (C.E.O of Bugatti & Lamborghini)
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and made his mark
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he changed his life from one
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to another and ultimately
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the brands at the same time, by that understanding we can see that global
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can only possible if move around that can challenge you. In summary, A person can only learn so far until he sees himself, In
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we discussed
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two successful people who made a mark in the fortune 500. In my opinion, in
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cases, we can see that they pursued
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own pattern of achievement which makes them successful in
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Longevity
  • Corporate ladder
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Professional network
  • Diverse skill set
  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
  • Resilience
  • Seniority
  • Job market
  • Career trajectory
  • Company culture
  • Professional growth
  • Job security
  • Promotion prospects
  • Cross-functional experience
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