In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this ?

Despite knowing the importance of natural resources, people still lack to protect them. Most developing countries have been known for their participation in polluting the quality of
air
and
water
.
This
essay will examine the causes and possible solutions to
this
problem. Two main causes of
declining
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quality of
air
and
water
are gases emitted from factories into the
air
and chemicals or waste dumped most especially in oceans and seas. When factories release various
substances
into the
air
,
this
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is very dangerous because the
air
becomes toxic
thus
causing or making it difficult for humans and animals to
breath
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.
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example
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a recent study for Harvard estimated that about
two-million
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(2,000,000) species of birds were found dead because of the increase of hazardous
substances
ejected into the
air
.
Also
, when
substances
entering the
water
are not controlled
this
can lead to major problems.
For instance
, several people have complained about going to take
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swim at the beach and having health problems
such
as allergies the following day. Some possible solutions to
this
problem are setting strict policies that restrict hazardous
substances
being
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released into the
air
and
water
and
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those who break
such
terms.
By having
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strict policies set by the government
this
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will force a large number of industrial and construction companies to carefully follow the protocols,
Moreover
for
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those who agree to these terms but later chose to break them will face penalties.
For
instance
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companies can be finned and banned from
business
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the business
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. To summarize, emitting various
substances
into the
air
and
water
has serious consequences for humans and animals.
However
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we can prevent
this
by implementing strict policies on what goes into the
air
and
water
and
also
penalising those who break
such
terms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution control regulations
  • emissions
  • discharges
  • green technology incentives
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable materials
  • waste management policies
  • recycling processes
  • environmental monitoring
  • compliance with environmental standards
  • public awareness campaigns
  • environmental protection
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • modern building techniques
  • international environmental organizations
  • air and water quality management
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