People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

In the contemporary world, people are addicted to almost every food item which is sold in the market.

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, soft

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are one of the main drink items consumed by humans,

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adhesive amounts of sugar which

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harmful to the human body.

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I will provide an explanation of why people are drinking too much and what are ways to deal with the problem. To commence with, most of the fizzy

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are swallowed by teenagers, who are either attending school or university, despite

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fact most of the workforce who are working in an office is addicted to the

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because the companies have targeted a market in advertising their products,

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as Fanta, Sprite etc, and these marketing strategies make children and adults get more attracted to the sugary

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we humans are following a particular trend that each and every human being does, and

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of the trend the younger generation gets addicted more to different flavours.

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, there are solutions which can reduce the consumerism of carbonated

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among the generations,

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, if the government take responsibility on their hand and publish the effects of drinking too many soft

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on televisions and in newspapers, diseases

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as high diabetics and high blood pressure could be controlled up to a certain extent,

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parents will be more conscious before lending money to children for buying

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which contain excessive sugar.

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, another important fact the media can support mankind, to reduce the number of sugary

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they drink, is that they can increase the price. As an

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example the government can impose a high tax on sugar-based

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. To sum up, even though the government provide possible solutions to reduce consumerism of highly sugary

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, it's our own choices we have to control before buying these

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to be protected from harmful diseases.