People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

In the contemporary world, people are addicted to almost every food item which is sold in the market.

However

, soft

drinks

are one of the main drink items consumed by humans,

besides

, these

drinks

have

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adhesive amounts of sugar which

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harmful to the human body.

Therefore

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I will provide an explanation of why people are drinking too much and what are ways to deal with the problem. To commence with, most of the fizzy

beverages

are swallowed by teenagers, who are either attending school or university, despite

this

fact most of the workforce who are working in an office is addicted to the

drinks

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because the companies have targeted a market in advertising their products,

such

as Fanta, Sprite etc, and these marketing strategies make children and adults get more attracted to the sugary

drinks

.

In addition

to the

first

reason, the

second

is that

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we humans are following a particular trend that each and every human being does, and

as a result

of the trend the younger generation gets addicted more to different flavours.

On the other hand

, there are solutions which can reduce the consumerism of carbonated

beverages

among the generations,

therefore

, if the government take responsibility on their hand and publish the effects of drinking too many soft

drinks

on televisions and in newspapers, diseases

such

as high diabetics and high blood pressure could be controlled up to a certain extent,

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parents will be more conscious before lending money to children for buying

drinks

which contain excessive sugar.

However

, another important fact the media can support mankind, to reduce the number of sugary

beverages

they drink, is that they can increase the price. As an

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example the government can impose a high tax on sugar-based

drinks

. To sum up, even though the government provide possible solutions to reduce consumerism of highly sugary

drinks

, it's our own choices we have to control before buying these

beverages

to be protected from harmful diseases.