Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

In modern society, a considerable proportion of citizens prefer to live in the

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centre due to a number of better job opportunities and

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had led to overpopulation in a particular

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. While

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some people argue that altering the

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locations

of big

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and factories along with their employees to the rural regions can mitigate the rising problems. In my opinion, I am convinced that

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measure can address

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both

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and residence problems. At the outset, the number of

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vehicle

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will

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drastically

decrease as soon as the large enterprises are moved to the upside

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. Undoubtedly, the main reason for which

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individuals

moving

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to

metropolitain

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metropolitan

cities is to land a prestige job. Most of the widely known companies are located in the capital

city

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as

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google company located in New York and Samsung in Seoul. When the location of these well-known companies

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transferred

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transferred

to rural areas, myriads of candidates who are keen to become a member will no longer have reasons for them to live in the

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.

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, as the population dwindles, obviously the

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congestion will likely be eased.

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to the

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issues, there will be

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plenty

of spaces in which for people to live in the urban

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when the

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are moved to the countryside. There is no doubt that large

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recruit tonnes of employees compared to other small companies in order to meet their needs.

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the

employees

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point of view, when their workplace is moved to a remote

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, which requires long

traveling

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hours from their residences, it will be hard for them to endure

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burden

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unless they chose to live close to their working places.

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, lots of

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dwellers will give up living in the metropolis, resulting in a

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increase

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decrease

of

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housing areas. In conclusion, as the job opportunity consists the most in

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attracting

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people

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people

to come and live in the

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, I am

firmly

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of the opinion that when the

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are distributed to rural places, not only is the

traffic

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jam but housing

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concerns

concers

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concerns

will

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be soon mitigated.