Some individuals believe raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce traffic accidents.

There are so many laws that should be put in place that are best measures to reduce traffic

accidents

and among rules, raising the minimum legal

age

for driving motorcycles is by far not one of them. In most countries the

age

restriction for driving is 17 years and below, any person over that

age

can drive in many countries worldwide, Young people drive safe because their

mind

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and vision are still intact

therefore

I do not agree with raising the

age

restriction. We have problems like drinking and driving which is one of the main

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causes

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of

accidents

on the

road

, people are becoming careless and risk their lives and other

road

users because of drinking and driving which affect vision and concentration ,

therefore

resulting in

accidents

.The government should put roadblocks in place for checking alcohol use during driving

for example

by introducing alcohol blowers for substance testing in traffic drivers. Another rule that can be put in place is no use of cell phones or any communication platform that can take the driver 's attention away from the

road

. For , example, crowds always want to show off their lives and activities and they end up using platforms like Tiktok,Facebook, Instagram and so on while they are driving which

distract

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attention when driving. Fines should be given to careless individuals who break the cellphone rule and

this

will make the crowd more careful and not use gadgets while driving. In my conclusion, there are a lot of situations that can contribute to

road

accidents

and those are even more fatal than just the limitation of

age

on driving. Sick folks are some of the main causes of

accidents

, no one who is sick should not be allowed to drive. A lot of

accidents

are caused by drivers who get

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while driving,

for example

, people who had strokes, seizures,heart attacks or dementia patients.