Some people work for the same organisation all their working life.Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.

For most people,when they get their
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throughout their working life.If they decide to change,they need to consider how
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their career overall. People who stay with the same
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have the advantage of
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understanding how it works and becoming familiar with the staff and processes.If they work hard,their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire.Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees,including bonuses and reward schemes.
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,one of the drawbacks of staying with the same
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is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year.In some cases,
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can lead to boredom and disillusionment.Moving from one
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to another can be
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decision in order to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience.For an instance,I graduated from the faculty of
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I worked at different workplaces
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as
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I worked as
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in
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bank which made just money
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made me knowledgeable in a range of translation and relation fields and in my view
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provided me with a much more interesting working life.
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.I feel that it is
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valuable,for an employee to be able to offer a wide range of experience having worked for different companies.As long as it is planned carefully.I think that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee and the employer.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Longevity
  • Corporate ladder
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Professional network
  • Diverse skill set
  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
  • Resilience
  • Seniority
  • Job market
  • Career trajectory
  • Company culture
  • Professional growth
  • Job security
  • Promotion prospects
  • Cross-functional experience
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