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You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter - express your interest - ask for details of the work that needs to be done - let them know when you are available.

#advertisement #newspaper #volunteers #work #children #head #organisation #interest
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the volunteering activity for the "Children care" organization
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 in the "Daily news" on the 25th of October. Let me share more detail about
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 and my motivation. Helping children to grow in a safe and kind environment has always been my passion. To pursue my dream, I studied
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 Learning and Development"
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 at the "State university". Since my graduation, I have been working as a full-time elementary school teacher at the local branch of "Main school" for
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 years now. In my
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 I value kind and supportive communication with kids and adults. For more information about my credentials, please find my CV and recommendations in the
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. I would like to know more detail about the volunteering, if possible.
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, what is the specific task you need volunteers to perform?
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, what is the location
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 the job
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 need volunteers to work
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 I am available on Saturdays and Sundays from 10 am to 15 pm. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Gleb Kamenetsky
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