You recently saw an advertisement in a newspaper seeking volunteers to do unpaid work with local children. You are interested in this work. Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter - express your interest - ask for details of the work that needs to be done - let them know when you are available.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the volunteering activity for the "Children care" organization

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advertized

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in the "Daily news" on the 25th of October. Let me share more detail about

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and my motivation. Helping children to grow in a safe and kind environment has always been my passion. To pursue my dream, I studied

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Learning and Development"

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program

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at the "State university". Since my graduation, I have been working as a full-time elementary school teacher at the local branch of "Main school" for

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years now. In my

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I value kind and supportive communication with kids and adults. For more information about my credentials, please find my CV and recommendations in the

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attachement

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. I would like to know more detail about the volunteering, if possible.

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, what is the specific task you need volunteers to perform?

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the job

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Finally

, what days and

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you

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need volunteers to work

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I am available on Saturdays and Sundays from 10 am to 15 pm. Thank you for your time and consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Gleb Kamenetsky

Submitted by glebkamenetsky on Thu Oct 27 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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