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Proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other languages in addition to english, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts show information about how British
students
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 of one
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university
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 speak other
languages
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 other than
English
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 percentage-wise in 2000 and 2010. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that most
students
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 are speaking other
languages
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 than
English
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 in that particular
university
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 in the given period. Looking into the details, the Most spoken
language
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 in both years is Spanish. 30% of
students
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 speak Spanish in the
university
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 in 2000 but
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 percentage increased by 5% to 35% in 2010. 15% of
students
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 speak another
language
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 and 10% of
students
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 speak two other
languages
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 in the
university
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 but these percentages increased by 5% in 2010 and 20% of
students
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 speak another
language
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 and 15% of
students
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 speak two other
languages
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 in 2010.15% of
students
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 speak a french
language
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 in 2000 but the percentage was increased by 5% to 15% in 2010. While 20% of
students
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 in 2000 and 10% of
students
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 in 2010 don't speak any other
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English
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 at the
university
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, about 10% of
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 speak german in both years and there is no change in german speaking
students
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university
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • proficiency
  • linguistic diversity
  • polyglot
  • language acquisition
  • second language (L2)
  • foreign language
  • fluency
  • working knowledge
  • mother tongue
  • language competence
  • language decline
  • cultural exchange
  • global language
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