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The line cart compared the change of different purpose to visit UK during 2000 to 2016 by international tourists.

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Overall, the number of 4 kinds of aims that visitors go to
UK
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the UK
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 during the 16 years rose in general. At
first
, out of 4 purposes, there were more than 9000,000 people visiting
UK
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the UK
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 because of
holiday
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a holiday
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 in 2000, while the initial population of visitors who went to
UK
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the UK
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with
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for
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 miscellaneous reasons was the lowest about 2500,000. After that, the number of tourists who went to
UK
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the UK
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 for holiday met a slight drop to 7000,000 in 2001 ,
then
 it rose dramatically in the following 15 years up to nearly 15 million. On the opposite, the figure of the counterpart with
diversity
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 aims kept a stable level without significant change during the same periods.
In addition
, the number of people who went to
UK
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the UK
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 for business and visiting mates or family members increased at
first
 and met an intersection in 2003 at 6 million. Both of them
have
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apply
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decreased
similarly
form
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from
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 2006 to 2009, in the final stage they went up to 10 million
in
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on
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 average, with around
2000
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a 2000
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 thousand
gap
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 in 2016.
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