You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter . say why he/she would not enjoy going to college . explian why getting a job is good idea for him/her . suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Rajesh, I received your letter today and have gone through that. Please consider my following requests for your benefit.
Firstly
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, I know about your educational background, and I am aware of the fact that what you are doing now. I don't want you to go
college
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for
further
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studies as age is the primary concern for me in your case. If you opt for
further
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studies now, compulsory, it impacts your marriage and your career later. So, I suggest you, Please look for a job based on your preferred domain. If you opt
going
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for a job, Definitely, I can assure
that
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you that
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you will be having a bright future
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from
fron
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from
now onwards. I know your awareness
about
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of
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present
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market in your field. Anyway, I want to give you a few suggestions regarding the jobs available right now. Cloud is having a good no of vacancies now along with the Developers market based on your educational Qualification.
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, I request you to choose one among the two and apply for jobs. Yours Faithfully, Niranjan Reddy K.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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