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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, . say where you think you left the papers . explain why they are so important . tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Manager, Myself Niranjan here. I have booked a meeting room in your hotel today to discuss something related to future projects of our company. I am writing
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 letter because I left a few documents by mistake in the meeting room.
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, We have to submit The Tender by
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 week for the process of tender documentation, those papers are essential as the papers have
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the project
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, Planning related information,
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 of activities etc.
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, the budget
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 all activities and
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the Overall
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 cost of the project. It has Graphs
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 Performance Index and Cost performance Index,
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important to convince the client. So, I am going to send my assistant to your hotel tomorrow. I want you and your staff to check once for those documents in the meeting room and give them to my assistant. It will be beneficial for me if you do the needful. I will be waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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