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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others, however, disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I received an Email a few days back from our Human Resource Team related to sharing of personal
information
 of all
employees
. I want to share my views about the Pros and Cons of it.
Firstly
, the following factors,
such
 as Hobbies, Food Interests, Preferred locations, Single or married, Salary details etc., come under Personal
Information
.
Secondly
, having personal
information
such
 as hobbies, preferred destinations to visit, food interests etc., of
employees
 facilitates the Management in organizing an event either in the office premises or in any resorts for refreshments events
such
 as Sports or open-air concerts with all
employees
. The competition in resorts allows
employees
 to know more about each other and helps the office environment look good later. Having
information
 about Blood Group will be helpful in any emergency condition to react and get it done as fast as possible in any emergency condition. Regarding disadvantages, an individual's personal
information
 is optional to know everyone as some may misuse it in other ways. Related to an employee's salary, it is better to keep the
information
 private even with your colleague as it is indirectly responsible for team coordination while performing daily activities. It
also
 impacts the team's performance in the long run and allows us to create a kind of grudge among
employees
. Having
information
 about an individual to a certain extent is enough. Sometimes, knowing more
also
 causes many problems and indirectly affects our performance. So, please do your work daily and not think about your colleagues. Yours Sincerely, Niranjan Reddy K.
Submitted by niranjanreddy791 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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