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Average carbon dioxide (CO2) emission per person in the united kingdom, sweden, italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007

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The graph shows information about the average carbon dioxide emission per
person
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 in four countries of Europe between 1967 and 2007. Overall, In the united kingdom and
Sweden
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 per
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emissions
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 decreased while in Italy and Portugal they increased during the given period. Looking into the details, In 1967 Italy and Portugal are making around 4.2 and 1.2
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 per
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 respectively but that increased sharply in 1977 for Italy and passed 6 while for Portugal it studly growing and crossed 2. In 1987 for both countries per
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emissions
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 continuously growing and in 1997 they touched around 7.5 for Italy and 4.7 for Portugal but after that, it remained studied until the end of the period.
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, in 1967 for the united kingdom and
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, the per
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 emission was around10.7 and 8.7 respectively but in 1977 it increased rapidly for
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 and go above 10 while for the UK it was studied. In 1987 for
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 it declined and come to around 6.5 but for the UK it was around 10. In 1997, for
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 per
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emissions
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 was continuing their downward trend and come to 5.2 in 2007 but for the UK the decline was very slow and it only comes down to around 8.7 in 2007.
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