You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-years-old child. write a letter to the parents.In your letter . explain why you would like the job . give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ . say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

I am writing to you regarding the advertisement in the Australian magazine.Let me explain more in detail. I decided to take a new job in my free time.I had been working as baby sitter from 2019 until 2021 because I really enjoy with them.
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, I used to study baby care so I think
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, improving culture and keeping their bodies with exercise or healthy food is completely amazing for me.
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about my free time I should say I am used to studying
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and
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I am playing Football every day.
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, I was working in a hospital until 1 month ago but today I have
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free time so to
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illustrate
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if you accept my request not only care
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children, but
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I can teach
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culture
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culture
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so I have knowledge and
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person to employ. Looking forward to receiving your reply. Yours faithfully, Saeed thorough.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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