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You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.

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Dear Mr Sharma, I am one of the guests of your hotel who used your facilities
last
 week. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I am very dissatisfied with the services of your hotel room. The main issue was the water heater which did not work properly. Other than that even the basic amenities
such
 as a garbage box were not provided.
Further
, when I asked for the housekeeping services the staff didn't show up. I really felt disappointed about my choice of hotel when I had to face these problems. I hope you understand how difficult it is in
such
 cold weather to live without a geyser.
Moreover
, on my arrival itself, the room was not cleaned and I had to stay in an un-hygienic place for two days. I would like you to look into the services of your property and take appropriate action on a timely basis. You should train your staff in advance regarding the hospitality feature as well. I hope you would consider my letter as a turning point for your future guests. Yours faithfully, Sneha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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