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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males and females from certain jobs because of their gender?

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It is widely believed that
men
 and
women
 have different potentials in different subjects or tasks. Some people think that it could be a good idea to ban
male
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 or females from doing specific professions. As there are always exceptions in everything, I think at many points it could be a wrong idea. On the one hand, some
researches
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 have stated that if
men
 and
women
 want to have a healthy lifestyle, they will have to work for a certain amount of working
hours
 during the week. It is said that
women
 must not work more than 40
hours
 while for
men
 it is almost 48
hours
.
Therefore
 we can conclude
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that
tht
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that
 those jobs which demand working more than 40
hours
 a week are not suggested for
womenwomem
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women women
 and they shouldn't be able to ask for being hired in those occupations.
On the other hand
, it is widely clear in our daily life that there were always
women
 who worked even more than 50
hours
 a week and in spite of
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 they lived long lives with
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good physical and mental health. There is a belief which is held by some people that
men
 cannot be good teachers in nursery schools because they are not as patient, kind,sympathetic, and caring as
women
. And in some cultures it is believed that
men
 could never be good enough like
women
 for jobs like administrating, selling products, marketing and etc, which require a high level of skill in communicating. Personally, I totally disagree with both views since I have seen males being good in those occupations.
For instance
 , my friends are working in those fields and they are really successful. I myself am a teacher of children and I am a well-liked teacher where I work. In conclusion, we can confidently state that excluding males and females from certain jobs is not
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 right thing to do since there have always been and will be a lot of exceptions.
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