Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic congestion and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today’s tourism industry?

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Nowadays, environmental issues caused both by
tourists
and tourism-related activities have become so grave that many people insist on imposing hefty taxes on air travel and hotels for the sake of restricting the tourist inflow. I,
however
, disagree with
this
notion and believe that the
authority
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authorities
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should find better measures to address
this
rather than limiting the tourism industry with the burden of extra tax.
First,
the key reason why I believe that governments ought to avoid levying more taxes on flights and accommodations
is
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that tourism creates employment for local people and makes economic movements in the region.
Furthermore
, it
also
brings significant foreign remittance to the country. Many countries, St. Lucia, Maldives and Thailand,
for example
, heavily depend on the steady earnings of their tourism sector.
In addition
to that, it makes people tolerant of different cultures and lets them learn about diverse cultures and traditions. If more taxes are imposed on the movement and accommodation of visitors, it would bring catastrophic results for many countries.
Therefore
, measures which would entail a decline in
tourists
should not be implemented. To control pollution and excessive wastage, authorities can employ workers to clean their surroundings
while
instructing visitors not to pollute the environment. Policies to improve the manners of travellers should be implemented as well. Improving public buses and dedicating transport to foreign
tourists
can reduce traffic congestion to a great extent.
Moreover
, scientific research and engineering feats can reduce the pollution created by vehicles and aeroplanes, and money should be spent on
such
research works. These solutions would improve the situation on the one hand, and not deprive citizens of jobs and economic freedom
on the other hand
.
To conclude
, extra levies on tourist transportation and accommodation will limit the inflow of
tourists
, putting local citizens' livelihoods at risk, especially in tourism-dependent countries. It is expected that the authorities would find better solutions that try to control pollution created by
tourists
’ actions in travel destinations
instead
of reducing their number.
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