Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic congestion and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra taxes on flights or accommodation to restrict today’s tourism industry?
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Nowadays, environmental issues caused both by
tourists
and tourism-related activities have become so grave that many people insist on imposing hefty taxes on air travel and hotels for the sake of restricting the tourist inflow. I, Use synonyms
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authority
should find better measures to address Fix the agreement mistake
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rather than limiting the tourism industry with the burden of extra tax.
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that tourism creates employment for local people and makes economic movements in the region. Change the verb form
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brings significant foreign remittance to the country. Many countries, St. Lucia, Maldives and Thailand, Linking Words
for example
, heavily depend on the steady earnings of their tourism sector. Linking Words
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to that, it makes people tolerant of different cultures and lets them learn about diverse cultures and traditions. If more taxes are imposed on the movement and accommodation of visitors, it would bring catastrophic results for many countries. Linking Words
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tourists
should not be implemented.
To control pollution and excessive wastage, authorities can employ workers to clean their surroundings Use synonyms
while
instructing visitors not to pollute the environment. Policies to improve the manners of travellers should be implemented as well. Improving public buses and dedicating transport to foreign Linking Words
tourists
can reduce traffic congestion to a great extent. Use synonyms
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, scientific research and engineering feats can reduce the pollution created by vehicles and aeroplanes, and money should be spent on Linking Words
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To conclude
, extra levies on tourist transportation and accommodation will limit the inflow of Linking Words
tourists
, putting local citizens' livelihoods at risk, especially in tourism-dependent countries. It is expected that the authorities would find better solutions that try to control pollution created by Use synonyms
tourists
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