Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However these days fewer and fewer appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

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Major Variables Studies: Independent Variable(s): (1)Playing with a video games on iPad or smartphones. (2) Watching an informative cartoons about anesthesia procedure. (3) Giving a midazolam . • Dependent (outcome) Variable(s): preoperative anxiety level in pediatric patients . • Variable Analysis Used (include whether appropriate to answer research questions/hypothesis or discover themes): The Kolmogorov-Smirnov and Shapiro-Wilk tests for numerical data were used to investigate the validity of the assumption of normal distribution. If there was a strong intergroup difference observed, a post hoc Mann–Whitney U test with Bonferroni correction is used . The Chi-square test or Fisher's exact test was used to analyze categorical variables. The lowest anxiety levels and the greatest reduction in anxiety from baseline were seen in patients who used tablets to play games.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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0Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

127 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
STEAM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Arts, Mathematics)
economic instability
public engagement
media promotion
grants
scholarships
viable career
economic benefits
digital entertainment
traditional forms of art
artistic endeavors
curriculum
comprehensive art education
public art programs

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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