You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Dear Tim, I am writing
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complete my
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programme.
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Recently
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Recently
, I applied
a
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programme
that is
a
qualification
mechinning
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machining
technology. When I get
this
qualification
, I can improve my skills and can resolve lots of problems that
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frequently happened in my job. The programme will spend me two months
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so
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I hope you can give me two
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time off work to complete it. I suggest that during the period, I can back to
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and continue some jobs on the weekend. When I finish
this
class, I will back to work
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immediately
immidiately
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This
qualification
can
helps
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me get lots of knowledge
such
as how to operate the machine and how to resolve
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problems.
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with more qualities and can help other
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improve their skills. I deeply wish you could allow my application, thank you so much. Yours
sincenery
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sincerely
scenery
! Kevin
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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