You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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I am writing to inform you that I will need two months to complete my qualification program. I recently applied for a qualifying

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certificate, I will be able to develop my skills and solve many of the challenges that have arisen in my job. The program will spend me two months so I hope you can give me two months' time off work to complete it. I suggest that during the period, I can back to the workshop and continue some jobs on the weekend. When I finish

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class, I will back to work immediately.

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qualification can help me get lots of knowledge

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I can make products with more qualities and can help other workmates improve their skills. I deeply wish you could allow my application, thank you so much. Yours sincerely! Kevin

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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153 words

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