You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to you to complain about the bad service that I met two weeks ago. I am a student who
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University.
Last
month I rent an apartment, but the owner asked me to pay the rental fee by
cheque
. I went to your bank which is located in 123 street two weeks ago. The counter whose name is Jack,
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was so surprised when he heard my request. He told me if I need a new
cheque book
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, I have to wait three days.
Then
he turned his face to talk to his workmate. I wrote my information of address to him
then
I left the bank.
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that day, I have been waiting for two weeks but I didn’t receive anything. I am so angry because I have to pay the rental fee right now. I think maybe Jack didn’t
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cheque
book to me. I am very
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with his service. I suggest you help me to check my issue and send the
cheque book
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to me as soon as possible.
In addition
, I need Jack
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an
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to me. I am looking forward to
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your response, thank you! Yours faithfully, Kevin
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