You recently rented a car for a week. You were dissatisfied with the car. Write a letter to customer service manager of the car rental agency. In your letter: - Give details about the car rental and explain why you rented the car. - Explain what the problem was and how you responded - Describe what action you want the manager to take

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to lodge a complaint with regard to the car that I rented from your company, Zoomcar,

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last

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weekend. I booked a

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seven-seater

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seven seater

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Tata Safari from your website for one whole week. I was on a family trip to Jaisalmer and I needed a

vehicle

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from Delhi airport to my destination. My old parents were travelling with me and, I wanted a

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reliable

realiable

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reliable

service provider.

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, I booked it from your agency,

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, after picking

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up the

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vehicle

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from the airport, it became

out

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biggest nightmare. We could only travel fifty

kilometers

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when the

vehicle

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started showing

engine

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an engine

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warning sign. I immediately called your customer care number but they asked me to ignore the warning and continue the journey. After some more time, a loud noise started coming out of the engine and the

vehicle

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competely

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completely

stopped in

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of nowhere. Only because of your poorly maintained

vehicle

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, I was stuck on the road along with my whole family.

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your company arranged for

the

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help, they

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took four hours to reach

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our location. If your customer care representative could have taken

necessary

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countermeasures

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counter measures

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when I

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informed

infomed

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informed

them about the warning light,

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whole

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could have been avoided. In lieu of

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incident

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, I want you to refund my full booking amount because my whole vacation was spoiled.

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, I would request to improve your emergency operating procedures so that no other family faces

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incident

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. If you want more details about the

incident

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, please feel free to get in touch with me

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the number shared below. Yours faithfully, Aman Malik

amanmalik640

Nov 12, 2022

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

273 words

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