Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Different

professions

have very different wages. While some of them seem way

to

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high for the actual work, other

professions

seem to be underpaid.

People

of

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public life, especially entertainers like film stars,

musiciens

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musicians

and

sport

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stars earn very good

money

. But are they paid too much? On one side, being

this

kind of entertainer brings a public life with it, which means a

lot

of responsibility in every situation of their lives.

For example

,

people

will go talk to them on the streets,

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of

people

are following them on social media and

this

costs a

lot

of energy for the entertainers. Whatever they will say, it's going to be judged and they are role models to

the

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society.

Therefore

, it makes sense that they are paid a

lot

of

money

, even if their work in itself is not very important.

On the contrary

, their wage is very unfair to the

professions

that are much more important in

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society. Doctors and medical assistants,

for example

, are working much more and have an even higher responsibility, but are paid very poorly. In comparison to the

money

that entertainers earn, the difference is way too high.

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education that doctors have been through and thinking about the responsibility they have in

this

society, they should get paid much better. In conclusion, I think that

people

of

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public life are allowed to be paid a

lot

, but their wage is very

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excessive

, especially in comparison to the

money

that medical assistants earn. I believe that we should have a better balance of those

professions

.