Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Different
professions
have very different wages. While some of them seem way to
high for the actual work, other Replace the word
too
professions
seem to be underpaid. People
of
public life, especially entertainers like film stars, Change preposition
in
musiciens
and Correct your spelling
musicians
sport
stars earn very good Change the noun form
sports
money
. But are they paid too much?
On one side, being this
kind of entertainer brings a public life with it, which means a lot
of responsibility in every situation of their lives. For example
, people
will go talk to them on the streets, millions
of Correct word choice
and millions
people
are following them on social media and this
costs a lot
of energy for the entertainers. Whatever they will say, it's going to be judged and they are role models to the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, it makes sense that they are paid a lot
of money
, even if their work in itself is not very important.
On the contrary
, their wage is very unfair to the professions
that are much more important in the
society. Doctors and medical assistants, Correct article usage
apply
for example
, are working much more and have an even higher responsibility, but are paid very poorly. In comparison to the money
that entertainers earn, the difference is way too high. The
education that doctors have been through and thinking about the responsibility they have in Change preposition
With the
this
society, they should get paid much better.
In conclusion, I think that people
of
public life are allowed to be paid a Change preposition
in
lot
, but their wage is very excessif
, especially in comparison to the Correct your spelling
excessive
money
that medical assistants earn. I believe that we should have a better balance of those professions
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