Because of the global economy, many goods including what, we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Owing to
world
financial system, even earlier essential necessities are imported from the farthest Correct article usage
the world
countries
. It is highly lucrative. Use synonyms
Firstly
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also
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living
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live
in
other sides of the Change preposition
on
worlds
benefit Fix the agreement mistake
world
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from theses
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these
theses
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these
products
. What is more, in some Use synonyms
countries
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such
as China, due to overpopulation, a large number of workers are available which leads to reducing initial Linking Words
cost
. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Therefore
, other Linking Words
countries
prefer to import their needs rather than domestic production. These mutual interactions not only lead to Use synonyms
purchase
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purchases
countries
in needUse synonyms
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
cause the sale of the Linking Words
products
in exporting Use synonyms
countries
.
On the other side, shipping problems Use synonyms
such
as long distances, Linking Words
the
possibility of financial and life losses due to Correct word choice
and the
nature
disasters, throw a spanner in the work. Replace the word
natural
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Furthermore
it leads inflation to Add a comma
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generating
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in generating
country
because of Correct article usage
the country
shortage
in Correct article usage
a shortage
country
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the country
who
has dramatically exported Correct pronoun usage
that
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
products
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, users Linking Words
becomes
too dependent and after a Change the verb form
become
while
they could not survive without Add a comma
,while
other’s
need. In some cases, even Fix the agreement mistake
others’
tiniest
problem broke Correct article usage
the tiniest
international
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the international
relationship
. for instants in coincidental accidents, leaders blame each other.
To sum up, Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
countries
expand their relations by importing and exporting their Use synonyms
products
from far distances in the far corners of the world. It has a lot of advantages and some Use synonyms
rarely
drawbacks.Change the adverb
rare
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