You have booked a hotel for some reasons you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel for the same in your letter give details For the booking you have made Inform changes you want with your booking State reasons for the changes.

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about some modifications to the booking I made earlier

this

month at your hotel, 'Fairmont The Palm', Dubai,

further

I will be stating the differences in detail and would like you to make the same in my itinerary. Earlier I booked 1 Deluxe double bedroom for 2 adults including breakfast for 3 days but I would like you to book another room with the same amenities for 3 people with an addition of a crib for an infant.

Furthermore

, my check-in date has

also

been changed from 5th December 2022 to 7th December 2022.

However

, the check-out date is the same i.e 10th December 2022

hence

, no changes with other reservations I made earlier regarding my birthday dinner. All these variations have been made recently because my brother's wedding anniversary was coinciding with our dates and I wanted to spend some time with him.

Therefore

, I booked their tickets

also

for the trip as an anniversary gift.I am really looking forward to staying in the hotel along with my family. Yours faithfully, Fidan Durrani

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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thirdly
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moreover
also
for example
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although
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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

182 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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