Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter give the details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take

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Respected Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I accidentally left some of my luggage

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Shatabdi Express, train

number

12023 while I was travelling from Chandigarh to Delhi on

10th

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the 10th

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of November 2022. My seat

number

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the

above mentioned

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train was 45A in coach 10 and I deboarded the train at 11.30 PM at New Delhi Railway Station. I was carrying 2 bags with me i.e. one large suitcase which I took with me but unfortunately forgot a small black handbag on my seat. I kept that bag right above my seat and the bag is approximately 60

cms

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long and around 45

cms

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wide. On the top of the bag, the Nike company logo is mentioned and on the side, there is a traveller’s tag which has all my details including my phone

number

and residential address. I request you to please secure my baggage at the earliest and inform me on my mobile

number

09862712345 or on my email ID [email protected]. I really appreciate your help and hope to hear from you soon. Thanks and Regards Karan

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

184 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter give the details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. what is the cause of this damage? What should be done this problem?

With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

Some people think that it’s a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.