completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job.On the other hand other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skills is more important .Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are different views about

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occupation

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. While others argue that

university

is the most influential way to get

, others

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claim that

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research work is the best way to have experience in our life. I, on my part, believe that we ought to study after

university

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can find their own world. To

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with the view of the former groups, there are two reasons behind their

position

.

First

is that if students get well

occupation

, they can earn money earlier. Every teenager is able to research part-time jobs.

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, my dad was given

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when he did not apply to the

university

.

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to

this

, if

people

start working some places earlier, they have

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the experience

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to begin

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new

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career after

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a part-time

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job.

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, in our city

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most society

find

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occupation

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to improve their skill and be incendiary to start something unusual. Definitely, other arguments exist too, but the ones mentioned, I believe

to

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stand out. Turning to the latter group’s point of view, they

also

have their own grounds to justify the

position

they hold.

First

of all, if society

learn

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university

subjects after that they can possess

position

at workplaces more efficiently.

People

prefer to acquire a well-paid job despite the fact that they have not completed any related courses. Surprisingly,

people

study

university

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at university

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and offer that find the

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best

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beat

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work. In conclusion,

although

people

desire to get a job, it is highly recommended to graduate

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course

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. I am convinced that society ought to find

occupation

after education.