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You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: – Explain why you are unhappy – Request a refund – Make arrangements to return the damaged item

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to let you know my dissatisfaction regarding one of your products which I purchased
last
 week and having invoice number 00000XXX.
Initially
 while purchasing the television, enquired online stores about the
product
 and
also
 visited the retail store directly. After buying the item from your store and receiving the damaged commodity which makes me feel bad and
also
 the
product
 package was torn off before it reaching to my doorstep.
Firstly
, I have raised a complaint over the website but haven't gotten any prompt response
moreover
 I called the seller directly but no response, now I am expecting a refund which I paid for the
product
. I go through all the return policies which are mentioned on the website and made the necessary arrangements to return the
product
. Please collect the
product
 by early
next
 week after that I won't be available as I'm moving to Banglore on a business trip for one week. I am looking to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Varra Maruthi Reddy
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my disappointment
  • I regret to inform you that
  • I am dissatisfied with the item I received
  • The item arrived damaged
  • The product is in unsatisfactory condition
  • I expected better quality
  • I would like to request a refund
  • I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
  • I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
  • I suggest arranging a pick-up service
  • I expect a prompt response and resolution
  • I hope for a satisfactory outcome
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