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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to let you know that I had a booking with your airline flight number AXY23 on Wednesday that I missed because there was a long queue before the immigration counter due to malfunctioning of the computers. It was very important for me to board that flight as I was going to attend a conference overseas that would have helped me in fulfilling my professional aspirations. I was looking forward to being in that program because many renowned personalities from all over the globe were going to deliver their wisdom through speeches. I was planning for
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 trip for the past year that I missed. I have tried to explain the whole scenario and I was not at fault for the fact that I reached the airport on time and I had all my documents In order to help me I would like you to refund my ticket money because I never boarded that plane, which I paid for,
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, it would be very kind of you. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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