completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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group of people

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that if a person graduates

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university

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makes it possible to find a normal job. The

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group of people think that

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talented is

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of the most necessary qualities of

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human. It seems to me that

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educated is more important because it gives some kind of

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to realize goals. On the right hand, with help of the education individuals could alter their lives on

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good side.

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it will be difficult after hard studies they might get a

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occupation. Take

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the universities of my state. If the person enters

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of these universities they send their students to other countries in order to exchange

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knowledge with learners in those higher institutions.

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, they may exchange

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their experiences.

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, finding a job will be straightforward

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them.

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, developing soft skills has its advantages too.

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of studying several individuals select

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way because they like it.

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, my mother. After finishing

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school she had two choices the

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university and the

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one

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a design course. Even though she chose the letter she knew that it could not be easy.

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, after hard

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she became a designer and even

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opened her own design shop. In conclusion, I think that though they have many options to pursue their aims I support the

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group since with the help of studying the

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human might get both

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good work and

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knowledge.