Schools are spending more time teaching subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days in schools teachers are spending

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content

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as history. It is argued that

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of spending

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learning theory it's best to teach them technical skills which help them earn a living hood. I completely agree with the statement and

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am going to elaborate in the following paragraphs on how technical skills are helpful.

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history is important to us,

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theoretical material cannot help us to earn employment. If one student spends more

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on Job work by the

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he comes out of college, he is ready for the job.

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them to find a job but

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makes them

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stand out among the huge competition.

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a survey conducted by BSL International on students who worked during their college days found them more competent than others. It is true that learning new skills at an institution

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young adults

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overcome their fear and

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any learning required can be easily accessible at the college, while theory subjects can be learned easily by reading and understanding.

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the university of London has arranged a

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training institute to identify and train

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interest and make them

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field. In conclusion, despite theory subjects are important to know trends in the current era. I would strongly argue that learning technologies are paramount

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education which

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help

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adolescent to find their interest in their field

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consequently

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living hood.