Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games Outweigh the benefits?
In the recent computer era, the number of people who play online
games
has been increasing rapidly. In accordance with the trend, there has been continous
debate whether or not the phenomenon is beneficial for men and women who spend Correct your spelling
continuous
time
on it or, on the contrary
, it is harmful for
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, I would like to list some Correct your spelling
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and disadvantages of playing online Correct article usage
the advantages
games
and finally
state my opinion that the drawbacks account more
than the benefits.
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first
advantage of engaging in computer games
is its connectivity to remote friends and ability
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as well as adults
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, as well as adults,
each
other and be able to keep Change preposition
with each
semtiment
that they are part of society. Correct your spelling
sentiment
In addition
, by handling internet games
, people can improve their PC skills which may be good for their future studies or career progressions.
However
, on the other hand
, there are a few Correct your spelling
significant
signifinact
disadvantages of devoting a lot of Correct your spelling
significant
time
on
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Moreover
, in more advanced cases, they become reluctant to keep up with society
where they used to belong. Correct article usage
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seen when the situation Change the verb form
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they take. As a consequence, their health Correct your spelling
nutrition
deteriorate
and there would be a high chance that they become sick.
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although
there are a few very good aspects of playing video games
, I believe there are more risks than benefits when one spend
too much Change the verb form
spends
time
on them. It is certainly a good tool to learn internet skills and connect with friends in a
difficult conditions, Correct the article-noun agreement
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however
, it can be a huge threat to avert people's attention from study
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Moreover
, it can be harmful for
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attitude
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