Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs. To what extrnt do you agree or disagree with the above opinion? What are the some of the job skills employers look for new employees.

These days,
universities
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students ought to
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knowledge and practical
skills
with their future career benefits. In my opinion,
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agree that practical
skills
beneficial
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for students at their
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jobs and there are two other
skills
in employees that
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for
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. I agree that higher education institutes can a huge amount of knowledge
pupils
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with
the
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practical
skills
.
In other words
,
implementation
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of theories helps pupils to increase
knowledge
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and achieve practical
skills
such
as computer, driving and foreign language can help to get
better
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job
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jobs
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in future. The
skills
of working together with other
employee
increase.
For example
, many companies offer
job
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jobs
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based on before
skills
. One reason employers look for some
employee
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employees
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.
This
is because a creative mind can contribute in
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way
in
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the development of a company
by
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worker thinking. No employer allows a person with
a
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uncreative mind for a
job
.
For instance
, a creative
employee
can save the company from any situation.
Finally
, another reason is
ability
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to time management. A high number of tasks requires every worker
be
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able to manage their time and to arrange which one must be done in advance.
For example
, many responsibilities simply cannot be completed well without
such
skills
. In conclusion,
achieve
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the key factor
skills
succeed
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their
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future one to be
employee
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,
however
,
get
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a good
job
two other
skill
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can not be ignored.
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