Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs. To what extrnt do you agree or disagree with the above opinion? What are the some of the job skills employers look for new employees.

It is one of the most important things that universities must serve some useful

skills

which are necessary for

students

to succeed in their

work

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statement and discuss some

skills

that

is require

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for new

employees

. It is usually believed that to succeed in

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the job

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sector

there

need

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so

many

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practical

knowledge

, those

knowledge

students

can learn in their study

sector

.If they properly achieve different types of valuable things in university or college they can easily prosper in their

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workplace

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work place

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workplace

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.There are different practical

skill

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skills

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such

as computer

skill

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skills

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, how to deal with people and how can communicate with people these

activity

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activities

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students

can learn in their academic area.There

are

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is

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various

skillful

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skilful

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experience

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experiences

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that should learn by

students

is necessary and without

these

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they can not reach their goals and help their nation.

For

instance

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it

shown

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that about 90% of practical

knowledge

is achieved

from

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at

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university and college.In

this

case

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our study

sector

should improve their practical study. There are so many

skills

employers look for

new

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in new

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employees

.

Firstly

they search for

employees

who

work

properly and attentively.

Companies

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Companies'

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success depends on

employees

so they should need more

knowledge

if they apply

in

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their working

sector

.

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owner

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owners

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look for

such

workers who have

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teamwork

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team

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teamwork

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work

experience because

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teamwork

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team

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teamwork

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work

is a crucial

things

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. Computer

skill

is another essential

work

that must

be need

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be needed

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for

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by

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employees

.

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,50%of business success depends

of

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on

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workers like how they

work

and manage their job. In conclusion, university and college are the best

place

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places

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to learn different practical

knowledge

thus

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can help to improve

work

skill

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skills

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and

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there are so many

skills

that must need

for

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apply

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employees

.