some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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or perks to beneficial items like

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or treatment club and others. But, some people consider that there

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perks can play a high role

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the workforce, because it gives

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employee accurate aim and

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them more

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on the

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, the workers should maintain the work and life balance as well as it should develop their menthol health, due to

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, they can be stronger along with more efficient in the

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people

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in the

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club, they

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improve their capability of brain and it can lead to career progression along with

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one of the great ways to attain achievement

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of time.

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payments.

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Kazakhstan. In conclusion, the

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and leisure club can affect to

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health body and psychological condition

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may serve as an opportunity to achieve more.

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, the target-related payments should help grow employee motivation and performance