ome people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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The Lexus company officially introduced its new electric
car
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“Crossover LFZ Electrified”.
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coupe-shaped
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a coupe-shaped
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crossover, made based on sporty manners. Externally, the
car
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attracts attention with a high waistline, a large glazing area, frameless camera doors
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of classic mirrors, retractable handles, as well as thin LED optics. Lexus LFZ ELECTRİFİED has power installation, which can easily adapt itself to the road. Electric drive has
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of 544
housepower
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parameters, the new
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can be driven for 600 km
in
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one charge. 27. The new chapter in American branding is presented
Chrysler
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concept Chrysler Airflow.
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appearance and the characteristic features
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is the real “kingdom” of sensors. With regard to technology, Chrysler Airflow will be constructed on a new electric platform STL A Medium. 28. Lincoln company, demonstrates
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plan
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development on the example “Star” electro concept. The show
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’s appearance
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by the team, led by chief designer Ford Anthony Lo.
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development called QUIET FLIGHT. Lincoln Star has streamlined stripes and
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interior, but the crucial feature is the abundance of illumination. “Star” has all
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and sits.
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car
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newest electric platform, which allows to design
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with a back tie and autonomous control system. 29. Mercedes Benz has always been one of the most technologically advanced premium brands. Now it is time to combine luxury with environmental sustainability.
Unique
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architecture of Vision AVTR ‘s design merging in itself exterior and interior and creating
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world based on visual and emotional levels. Vision AVTR has been developed in accordance with the latest innovative developments
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electric drives. Based on
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the driver
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automobile
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interacts without
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device and commands. The new Vision AVTR is not just a vehicle, but a smart system
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