Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuus both views and give your opinion.

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It is a controversial topic for discussion, there are two points of view and people are divided between them, some would argue that completing
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education is the main target to get a decent job, others would see that interpersonal
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are most important in work-life. I do believe that both have the same significant importance. On one hand,
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university
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degree is considered to be an achievement for youth, those who want to get their
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dream job
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or travel to work abroad must finish their
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education.
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the vast majority of
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owners or companies when
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hire someone to work, the
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first
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first
requirment
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requirement
for any vacant place is
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educational certification.
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, the resume of any graduate does not have any value without having
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and experience,
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, it is arguably a linked process
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, gaining interpersonal
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has equal importance, how to
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communicate
comunicate
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communicate
with others,
practicing
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and knowing how to be a time work member and sharing responsibilities and
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duties
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the most successful firms that have employees could act as one united team.
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, getting
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experience is valuable to grow up in your career,
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developing your individual
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and having
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recent knowledge of your field
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thing is crucial if you look forward to
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a leader one day. In conclusion, getting a
university
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education and gaining soft
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and experience, have the same importance and they should not be divided or separated
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