Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Governments are always needing to decide where to invest whether in arts,

such

as music and theatre or public services.With the rise of

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extremist parties the decision between where to invest is much more complex and even the balance about spending on entertainment and public services. It

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that investing in cultural

activities

is a waste of money. Measuring the happiness and life quality of a population may tell a lot about the impact of investing in

this

field.

Firstly

, happiness is a critical thing in

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society and must be provided for the population. It is known that private companies provide paid events and entertainment for a lot of kinds of genre and contributes a lot dor the mental health of an environment.But not all

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people can afford it and the state has to take part

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.

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leads to the conclusion

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necessary that governments invest in social events for a completely happier environment in all classes.

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, for a good life

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it is very important

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access to culture. In São Paulo,

for example

, there is an event called "Virada cultural", it is a weekend full of concerts and cultural

activities

.

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event is totally free and

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provided by the city for all of the people who want to go. ,

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kind of initiative has a huge impact on

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society because will

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information by all the wages classes. To summarise, investment in cultural

activities

generates good impacts on the environment. Whether is important for governors to invest in other fields, with the disposed analysis cultural

activities

generate a large amount of good impact on

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society.