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Write a letter to your professor outlining why you are not satisfied with their course. In your letter: write the reasons why you are not satisfied with the course request to change your course indicate what course you want to take instead Write at least 150 words. You get 20 minutes to complete this task.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to let you know about my dissatisfaction with the current course which I
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 doing
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under your supervision for the
last
 year.
Firstly
, the main reason is that you are too busy with the senior students guiding them in their research program.
Secondly
, I don't have much interest in the current topic anymore.
In Addition
 to
this
 current course, there were other subjects that
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I choose from our college after completion of the first year. so, I am thinking
to change
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 my subject from aircraft engineer to
the
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commercial pilot licence. Could you please consider my request and forward the same to the college director?
Moreover
, As the current engineering course duration is 3 years out of which have completed one term, I would like to join the pilot subject which is quite related to
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current subject and I can utilize the one year of knowledge that I have learned so far. Please do the needful. Yours Faithfully, Varra Maruthi Reddy
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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