You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child Write a letter to the parents.In your letter •explain why you would like the job •give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. •say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

Dear Mr and Mrs Jones, I am writing to express my interest
to live
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with your family for six months and taking care of your six-year-old child. I found
this
job posted in the Australian magazine
last
week. I have always been fond of children. Plus , not only do I like to play with them but I
also
believe they are flexible.
That is
why I feel I will learn a great deal from your child. Importantly, I feel that taking care of children is not stressful as compared to other jobs which are hectic. It is solely because I get engaged in playing with them that I know I will always be around them. So , you can count on me since I am a reliable person. I have taken care of many young children residing
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Autralia
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Australia
, New Zealand and India.
Hence
I believe I will be suitable for the job.
Although
I will spend most of the time with your little fellow, I will not be available on Sunday evenings. In respite, will spend my time visiting malls and beautiful places in Australia. Yours Faithfully, Dylan Rodrigues.
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