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You are the member of a public library. You borrowed a book from the library, but could not return it by the due date. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -Mention the name of the borrowed book, and the due date for returning it -Describe the reason for not returning it -inform him when you will return it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I writing to bring to your attention about borrowed a
book
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 which I could not able to
return
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. I am going to tell you when I will
return
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 the
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 and why I could not able to
return
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 it before the due date. I am a software developer and I need to read about database management I borrowed a database management system
book
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 from your library and I committed that I will
return
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 on 1-12-2022 which I could not able to achieve. The reason that I could not able
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return
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 was that I was reading the
book
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 in my office and the day before you
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 the
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 I forget the
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 in the office and the cleaner did not know that
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 belongs to me so he deposit that
book
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 in the lost and found office.
However
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, I recover the
book
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 from the lost and found department but today is my project live date so I am very busy till tomorrow I will send you the
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this
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 Monday. I hope you will understand my problem and will not cancel my library card. Yours Sincerely, Ankur
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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