Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays there
are
Change the verb form
is
increasing
number of specialities and professions Change the article
an increasing
the increasing
people
can study therefore
sometimes it is hard to guess your own way from the first
time as it is only comes
with experience. Change the verb form
only comes
That is
why I personally think that it is crucial for students
lives to keep seeking Change noun form
students'
student's
for
their beloved Change preposition
apply
job
.
Our work
takes a significant part of life that is
why our happiness depends on the choice of our career. We can face a large number of situations when people
are stressed on
their jobs because they cannot be interested in what they are doing. To be fully involved in Change preposition
about
work
process, understand and love it an employee should really get into it Add an article
the work
otherwise
the job
is going to be a routine that is
only necessary for keeping yourself alive. Such
position
requires Correct article usage
a position
an
immediate solvation as it may get harder with time to change your current place of Remove the article
apply
work
. It is a quite widespread situation when people
understand more about the world they live in and professions
during studying their Correct pronoun usage
their professions
first
field so it may be easier to make the right choice from
the Change preposition
on
next
try.
We only live once so taking a second
degree is not a bad idea at all even if you can keep up with your current job
. An additional
high-level education can upgrade your personality, Remove the article
Additional
skills
and teach you in a different sphere Correct word choice
and skills
that
is
probably can expand your Unnecessary verb
apply
job
responsibilities. Another profit is that your employer may evaluate your courage and give you a better job
or to
promote you. By getting more and more information through Fix the infinitive
apply
such
a powerful
source Replace the word
power
such
as a university, Correct quantifier usage
apply
student
can expand Add an article
the student
a student
his
knowledge and know better what he is capable of.
To conclude, it is important for anyone to try another degree or profession if they are not happy with what they are currently doing as Correct pronoun usage
their
work
takes a huge amount of lifetime
and Replace the word
life
also
may define our personal interests and qualities. With our profession we can expand our knowledge and be a real professional
in Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
a
sphere we are working in, Correct article usage
the
Correct your spelling
which
witch
I think is great. In my personal opinion Correct your spelling
which
people
that understand that their job
can’t interest them should keep trying in finding their way of living.Submitted by nejo.quol on
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