Some people believe that visitors to others countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. ▪️Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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recent world, the number of

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travellers

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who visit foreign

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countries

countires

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countries

have

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been increasing rapidly. Under

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situation, some people state that the

locals

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should accept the

way

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those

visitors

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naturally behave even

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if such

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behaviours do not suit

to

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the local customs.

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, there are opinions that when visiting different

countries

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, tourists should act according to local habits even though they

are not align

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are not aligned

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with their mother

countries

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' manners. On

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account, I will discuss both views and

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state my opinion that foreign

visitors

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should align with the local cultures. The

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reason

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those who believe that the

locals

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should accept the

way

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visitors

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behave and learn cultural differences comes from the mindset of entertaining

visitors

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.

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, at the time of

Tokyo

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the Tokyo

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Olympics in 2021, the word 'omotenashi' prevailed

Japan

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in Japan

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.

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word means that we entertain foreign

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so that they can enjoy

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stay with maximum comfort.

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way

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of treating

visitors

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includes accepting their different cultures and providing

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things as

accormodations

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accommodations

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and foods in familiar ways to their taste.

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way

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of thinking makes sense if

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is something the

visitors

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really want. The

second

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way

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of thinking is that foreign tourists should learn

local

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about local

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cultures and behave

accordingly

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.

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, many tourists from overseas who visit Kyoto take off their shoes

at

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in

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the hotel rooms and take

bath

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the

way

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Japanese

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the Japanese

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do.

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, they eat Japanese strange foods and greet their hosts the

way

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the

locals

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do. As a consequence, those

travelers

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travellers

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can experience the country more closely and truly. Undoubtedly,

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way

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a way

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of spending time in a foreign country can

provides

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better learning to the people visiting there. In conclusion,

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there are two conflicting ideas regarding foreign

visitors

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' behaviours, I strongly believe that when

traveling

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travelling

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to other

countries

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, men and women should act according to the

countries

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' habits and manners. By doing so, they can learn

true

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the true

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lives of the

locals

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more closely and expand their views regarding cultural discrepancies.