Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: -what are the changes -what are the problems you are facing -what part of the service would you like to change

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that some problems have been triggered due to several modifications to

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services. Due to the increased

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routes, it takes a longer

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to reach my original destination, and it often delayed the arrival

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, more seats are removed, so it is detrimental to me due to

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all day long. I have shifted my work schedule to an earlier

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, so I should not be late for my work.

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, I have been working all day long, and it is hard to secure a seat to take some rest on the

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, I sometimes waited for a prolonged

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because the

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often arrives late. I cordially request to make an amendment regarding your

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schedule and hope you could reduce some

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stops so as to reach each stop on

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, it is beneficial for passengers to increase the number of seats, so more general people are able to sit down in order to increase safety on the

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. I look forward to learning your suggestions regarding my complaint and hope you take

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action to solve these problems. Yours Faithfully, Claire Chen