Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: -what are the changes -what are the problems you are facing -what part of the service would you like to change
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that some problems have been triggered due to several modifications to
bus
services.
Due to the increased bus
routes, it takes a longer time
to reach my original destination, and it often delayed the arrival time
. Additionally
, more seats are removed, so it is detrimental to me due to standing
all day long.
I have shifted my work schedule to an earlier Wrong verb form
stand
time
, so I should not be late for my work. Furthermore
, I have been working all day long, and it is hard to secure a seat to take some rest on the bus
. Moreover
, I sometimes waited for a prolonged time
because the bus
often arrives late.
I cordially request to make an amendment regarding your bus
schedule and hope you could reduce some bus
stops so as to reach each stop on time
. In addition
, it is beneficial for passengers to increase the number of seats, so more general people are able to sit down in order to increase safety on the bus
.
I look forward to learning your suggestions regarding my complaint and hope you take further
action to solve these problems.
Yours Faithfully,
Claire ChenSubmitted by claire9377 on
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