Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: -what are the changes -what are the problems you are facing -what part of the service would you like to change

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that some problems have been triggered due to several modifications to
bus
services. Due to the increased
bus
routes, it takes a longer
time
to reach my original destination, and it often delayed the arrival
time
.
Additionally
, more seats are removed, so it is detrimental to me due to
standing
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all day long. I have shifted my work schedule to an earlier
time
, so I should not be late for my work.
Furthermore
, I have been working all day long, and it is hard to secure a seat to take some rest on the
bus
.
Moreover
, I sometimes waited for a prolonged
time
because the
bus
often arrives late. I cordially request to make an amendment regarding your
bus
schedule and hope you could reduce some
bus
stops so as to reach each stop on
time
.
In addition
, it is beneficial for passengers to increase the number of seats, so more general people are able to sit down in order to increase safety on the
bus
. I look forward to learning your suggestions regarding my complaint and hope you take
further
action to solve these problems. Yours Faithfully, Claire Chen
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